Monday, November 1, 2010

Attempt at rappin'

NATURE
By: Mariah Deanda


Put your hands in the air
If you know what I mean
Flying high in the sky
And floating with the sea
 


Can you see the delight
In all of your possibilities
Swaying like the branches
Or rocking like trees















Feel the earth 
With your soul and feet
Wandering with the wind
And strolling down the street















Listen to all the sounds
And perhaps you'll learn
From babies crying 
And those who want to be heard










Look at the faces
Who walk on by
The expressions of struggle
And the ones who cry












The illness of the people
Suffocates earth's beauty
With drugs, alcohol
And death in the community












Raise your hands high
If you know beauty is here
Wave your hands around
And grasp the luxury of air




See our earth
As the mother of all
She holds us up 
And awaits our call







This was my attempt at rapping, obviously its a little off of a beat. But its okay because I got to stay what I wanted. Isnt that the beauty of writing, I can say what ever I want. The beauty of earth is often unknown by people who just see what they'd like. The detailed mountains and the clouds hovering just a little above them. The way you can just see the water at different angles, beneath, above, and how you can touch it. You'd think more people would notice the beauty of this planet that is keeping us alive. The danger that we have put onto this earth, and the danger that just so happens to be killing us. And sometimes we need to know someone else is there, something is there to guide us and that they will be there to comfort us. Like the rain, people tend to walk and cry in the rain and it makes them feel better, the sun makes people get outside and have fun, the lightning and thunder let us listen and watch and pay attention to it and where it goes, and the wind pushes us along so we arnt alone. Its just everything that we have on this earth, the trees, the branches, the grass, the cement, and the water, the soil. Its everything we are apart of. We are apart of such a larger thing, and what we cant see is how beautiful it is. Should be a sin not to know what lies out there. But that is what I was trying to express in this poem/attempt of rapping. Hahaha. Yeah


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